tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3886626624130364263.post8810264471710228926..comments2023-05-26T06:35:57.060-07:00Comments on ONE SHORE IN SILENCE: Free FallingAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13980610386630622755noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3886626624130364263.post-70228631813208345722013-09-20T10:43:13.176-07:002013-09-20T10:43:13.176-07:00Thanks Mary. I tried to let the two syllable lines...Thanks Mary. I tried to let the two syllable lines stand out for a mini-poem within the lai. I set those free from the convention of the form! I feel like such a... rebel! ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13980610386630622755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3886626624130364263.post-44186166459450211452013-09-18T07:24:34.741-07:002013-09-18T07:24:34.741-07:00Beautifully expressed. I FEEL the freedom in this...Beautifully expressed. I FEEL the freedom in this poem.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com