06 September 2013

Notions - Aisle ½ - 1

A flash in the pan, you've
enlightened this man with lucidity,
for the moment, anyway.
It's not everyday I am blessed
by your mindful caress.
You may not be my first,
but if I don't act fast it'll be
the last time you're mine!

© JPW 2013

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14 comments:

  1. Claudia06 September, 2013 12:43

    smiles...even a flash in the pan gives bright light...at least for a bit...ha...gotta be a fast catcher indeed...smiles

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    1. Unknown06 September, 2013 14:29

      Thanks, Claudia. The subject is revealed in the title. Notion (I'll half one). Did that trigger any light bulbs?

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  2. hyperCRYPTICal06 September, 2013 15:10

    Cleverly done!
    Anna :o]

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  3. Margaret06 September, 2013 20:13

    Well - I would like to know the answer... I'll blame it on the late hour ...

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  4. Brian Miller06 September, 2013 20:34

    hey if you can only get it once, make it could and flash fire...ha....hmm still wondering about what it might be...a tricky title...

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  5. Unknown06 September, 2013 20:37

    So, you're telling me you have no... idea?

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  6. Lady In Read06 September, 2013 22:34

    a bright idea:) your words certainly are

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  7. Semaphore06 September, 2013 22:36

    Aha! My guess: an 'idea' or 'inspration'!

    "Notion - I'll have one", "flash in the pan" - everything fits. I love it! Beautifully done!

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    1. Unknown07 September, 2013 06:11

      Thanks for the challenge, Semaphore. And it certainly was that. And thank you for your encouragement!

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  8. Mystic_Mom07 September, 2013 20:24

    Like it! Well done.

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  9. Unknown07 September, 2013 20:57

    Thanks, MMom!

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