...the poetic rambles of Joseph Philip Walters!
ha. a rather typical emotional response there in the end...anger when we are hurt but their turn away....nice touch on OZ
Thanks Brian. I usually get "Pay no attention to the man behind the poem!"
Goodbyes are always hard ~ I like how you set the time & story at the end ~ Each our own way, I say ~
The only way, say I, Grace! Thanks.
This is a strange mystical kingdom where everything is in italics... And the poem's nice, too.
I just go with the flow Nissa! Thankfully it flows nicely, Thank you!
Your narrator expresses well the conflicting emotions of goodbyes.........
Thanks for that, Sherry!
I can understand the anger in the end ... it's hard to say goodbye amicably. This is honest and real. Great write :)
Unfortunately, It sounds more real when you go through it a couple times. Thanks for stopping by, Loredana!
sometimes it's hard to say goodbye but the best thing, in retrospect. powerful words.
Very gripping piece and yes its hard to say good bye
Sometimes, yes it's true. Others, not so much! ;) Thanks Vandana!
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