03 September 2013

"Give Me A Break"®

Melted,
melded into a chocolaty mess.
Bars snapped into their
s e p a r a t e parts. spLayed out
on a pristine tablecloth.
Three and 2 and 3 and
too many bars needed
to simulate 80 eight.
The key is to keep the heat
at bay. Your Kit-Kat®  keyboard
has gone awry; no need to cry
"Give me a breAK!"
It is surely assumed!

© JPW

dVerse Poets Pub - Poetics: rattling the stick inside the swill bucket - Product Slogans

7 comments:

  1. Fun one, but it gave me a chocolate craving!

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  2. Fun one, but it gave me a chocolate craving!

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  3. ha, a fun blend of slogans...and the heat will def leave you in a mess...dont leave it in the car over day either...ack...

    you should drop this into OLN tonight...

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  4. This gave me a needed smile!

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  5. Definitely not alowcalpoem...but never the less there's always chocolate coated m*Ms for inspiration...

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  6. haha...what a fun play... really cool weave of slogans here...and beware of too much heat if you're a chocolate bar...smiles

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  7. Thanks I will have one chocolate break now, smiles ~

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