06 September 2013

Notions - Aisle ½ - 1

A flash in the pan, you've
enlightened this man with lucidity,
for the moment, anyway.
It's not everyday I am blessed
by your mindful caress.
You may not be my first,
but if I don't act fast it'll be
the last time you're mine!

© JPW 2013

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14 comments:

  1. smiles...even a flash in the pan gives bright light...at least for a bit...ha...gotta be a fast catcher indeed...smiles

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    1. Thanks, Claudia. The subject is revealed in the title. Notion (I'll half one). Did that trigger any light bulbs?

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  2. Well - I would like to know the answer... I'll blame it on the late hour ...

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  3. hey if you can only get it once, make it could and flash fire...ha....hmm still wondering about what it might be...a tricky title...

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  4. So, you're telling me you have no... idea?

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  5. a bright idea:) your words certainly are

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  6. Aha! My guess: an 'idea' or 'inspration'!

    "Notion - I'll have one", "flash in the pan" - everything fits. I love it! Beautifully done!

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    1. Thanks for the challenge, Semaphore. And it certainly was that. And thank you for your encouragement!

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