25 September 2013

Roger Williams Plays

Roger Williams plays
as the days dwindle -
we search for kindling
and Oolong tea brews.
The leaves the hue of a barn fire
take a flyer and are tossed;
drift past the window
Roger Williams plays
trees sway in the breeze
pleased to be rid of molting 
vegetation in celebration.
Falling leaves of red
and gold embossed with
a time stamp to be trampled
and piled, hours wiled away -
kids at play. Roger Williams too.
Summer kisses forgotten,
hands sun-burned and gnarled
you went away, winter's song
plays. I miss you most darling
when Roger Williams plays.

© JPW - 2013

Poetry Jam - October

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26 comments:

  1. Jeep, that is a very poignant write. Music can really bring back memories, can't it? Love that the leaves are embossed with a time stamp to be trampled and piled. So much beneath your words!

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    1. This piece of music in particular Mary, conveys the beauty of each falling leaf. The cascade of notes adds the movement to an already extraordinary melody. I wondered how one would convey that song with poetic style. I hope I accomplished what I set out to do! Thanks for noticing.

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  2. Summer kisses forgotten - this is full of passion and a forlorn mercy that almost breaks your heart. It really touches the soul. Well done.

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    1. The lyric speaks of the sense of loss with melancholy. Autumn will give way to Winter and all we can do is miss what had come before us, Alan. Thanks for stopping by.

      :...Since you went away the days grow long
      And soon I'll hear old winter's song
      But I miss you most of all my darling
      When autumn leaves start to fall."

      ~Johnnie Mercer's English lyric - Autumn Leaves

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  3. It's funny; I can almost hear the song ... such a melancholy and bittersweet feel to this one ... sigh.

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    1. Some memories linger in that way. But still tender moments.

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  4. i like the deep feeling finding expression in rich imagery......beautifully worded...

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  5. music def has the power to touch places not much else can...autumn is such an emotional time already...the missing/longing is def palpable in this....evocative and well played....

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  6. long walks, music, memories... I think Fall was made for reflecting. Beautiful imagery and words.

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    1. I totally agree, Margaret. Autumn is that pause inserted to force us to smell the burning leaves! Thank you for your kind words.

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  7. Your words are passionate and very lyrical in musical sense.

    Amazing poem my friend. :)

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    1. Thank you, Charlie(morethanzero). Passion is what we do! I'm glad it shows.

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    1. Thanks for that Laurie. I've been haunted by autumn this year for some reason. Nostalgia is a great link.

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  9. Music is great.. love how you mingled it with you rmemories.

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    1. We all connect to music in some way, Bjorn. Some of the strongest connections are melodic in their origin! Thanks.

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  10. This breaks my heart. Love and music are such a strong connection.

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    1. The lilting melody of Williams' rendition Autumn Leaves, does tug on heart strings, Misky! Thank you.

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  11. What a beautiful poignant music you have painted ~ The close is particularly touching ~

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    1. Thanks, Heaven. The cascade of notes falls like the leaves so honored in song. It is a sad and wistful song; its beauty does touch the soul!

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  12. I had to go and learn more about Roger Williams music...as I come back to this I can hear Autumn Leaves playing throughout your lines and feel the ache of the memories. well done

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    1. Thank you, Mark. Roger Williams was one heck of a player and this piece was of of his best. The inspiration came through for me, of that I am appreciative!

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  13. Jeep, loved the mention of Autumn Leaves, one of my favorite piano renditions of a song, right up there with Errol Garner's "Misty" and Nat King Cole's "Moonlight in Vermont."

    Play on, sweet Roger... Amy

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  14. Vivid and beautifully penned.

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