26 September 2013

Wonderful

You want to pull up stakes and make
a beeline out of dodge, but the old codger
has a score to settle; he tests your resolve
as your spirits wander. Under watchful eyes
your wish for non-existence is granted
and every man, woman and Zuzu is lesser
for it. Your brother dies, as do the guys
on his ship. You weren't there to save them.
Your mother sees another boarder,
not a son at all. You fall from her grace; losing face.
A bad Martini drives you to drink and  in the Nick of time,
a strange angel gets his wings on your dime!
You think you've wasted your life with so much to give.
This is the place to be, and the people you need to touch.
Is that asking too much of life?

© JPW - 2013

Poets United - Verse First: We Are Interconnected



12 comments:

  1. there is a lot in this poem..some of which I can relate to... well done

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    1. I appreciate that Robert. The fact that you can relate proves our interconnection!

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  2. JPW ~ This covers so much, feels so honest and true. I appreciate your perspective and the connections you make with the players in the poem. Really well done.

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    1. Than you so much Kim! It helps to get a solid prompt from which to work!

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  3. You think you've wasted your life with so much to give - This really sums it up, there is more to us all that the individual parts. Very nicely done.

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    1. We are the sum of our parts, Alan. That they are all so connected is what makes us special. Thank you!

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  4. Wow. Fantastic write. I especially like the closing lines........everything being as it is meant to be, in the end. Nice to meet you through Verse First. I love that bench looking out to sea............your profile photo. Cool.

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    1. The one shore in silence... my escape! The peacefulness is extraordinary. Glad to connect with poets of sure great talent. I learn a lot and hopefully lend something to the "conversation" Thank you Sherry!

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  5. Brave and bold! I like the honesty..we all make mistakes and it is in our humanity we are linked! Nice write

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    1. If we don't learn, we'll never grow, Ella! Happy to have made the connection! Thanks.

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  6. This IS the place to be - we do touch so many lives... we must have faith in every day.

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    1. Absoluitely, Margaret! Thanks for stopping by!

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